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    [FanFIC]-The tree of love! By-katythao

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    [FanFIC]-The tree of love! By-katythao

    Post  katythao on Mon Nov 23, 2009 7:34 pm

    Present
    November 9, 2045

    Dear, tree of love, How are you doing? It's been awhile since I last came to visit. I know you're probably mad at me, right? It's funny how you're always so calm. Well, I'm doing good and life itself is pretty fair. I don't know where to start or end my days sometime. I'm struck at "if" a lot and wonders what should I do? I miss those days. I really really do. It feels like yesterday.

    Sincerely,
    Ka

    CH 1
    Past
    September 9, 2045

    "Ka Marie-Christan Bonita, are you done writing in your diary"? say, Mom.
    "Mom, it's a journal. Not a diary". say, Ka.
    (Coming down the stairs)
    Mom, just call me Ka.
    Well, I love your whole name. Remember Marie is your grandma's middle name and Christan is your grandpa.
    "We have to go to Grandma's house today, right"? say Ka.
    Are you driving or I'm driving?
    You're driving, hun. I want you to get more experiences before you get your license.
    Okay, Mom.
    Just to let know you, hun. Your grandma wants you to spend the nights over her house.
    Again, why, Mom?
    She says so.
    So, you have to.
    This is the last time. okay, Mom?
    Mom?
    Are you listening?
    Mom?
    Go get your stuff, hun.
    -Ka, are you coming?
    (Knocking on the car window)
    In a bit, go in first, I have to write in my journal.

    Dear Journal, I'm writing again. Well, I'm at my Grandma's house again.
    I don't know why she always wants me to come over here.
    There's nothing interesting around here anyway.
    There's trees and more trees. Wow!

    Sincerely,
    Ka

    Ka, don't let me repeat again.
    Coming, Mom.
    Hi, Grandma.
    Hi, Ka.
    Well, hun, your Grandma just told me; she remodeled her backyard.
    Go check it out.
    Okay, Mom.
    (saying sarcastically)
    (Ka goes outside to the backyard)
    It's still the same.
    (Ka sees a bunny and follows it)
    (Into the forest, Ka went)
    Mr. Bunny come here. Hey, don't run.
    (Ka starts to run)
    Mr. Bunny...
    (Ka trips over a branch)
    Ouch, Mr. Bun...
    There stood a big, tall, beautiful, tree.
    Oh, it's so pretty.
    (Ka gets up and looked at the tree)
    So, Grandma really did remodel her background.
    (Ka turns around and look around)
    Why is the tree so far from her house, then?
    Hello, Mr. Tree.
    (Ka touches the tree)
    (A bright light appears and Ka disappears)
    All that was left was the tree.

    End of Ch 1.


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    Re: [FanFIC]-The tree of love! By-katythao

    Post  Mei~ on Fri Nov 27, 2009 3:49 am

    I really like the way you write
    I enjoyed reading this... even though it was too short

    I hope you can update this soon =)

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    Re: [FanFIC]-The tree of love! By-katythao

    Post  katythao on Wed Dec 16, 2009 1:43 am

    I'm going to write some more soon. I have been busy with finals.

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    CH 2-Who I'm I?

    Post  katythao on Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:17 pm

    CH 2
    The sunlight creak through the blinds and beamed at Ka.
    (Ka wakes up and walks to the bathroom)
    Here’s another beginning.
    (Yawning)
    (Ka looks into the mirror and screams)
    Who’s this; how?
    Maybe, I’m just seeing stuff.
    I’m not a man.
    (Ka looks into the mirror again)
    Noooooooooooo!
    (Ka lifts her shorts up and checks herself)
    Oh, no, this is not right.
    This is a dream.
    *Ka, you’re just dreaming.
    (* Repeat twice)
    (Ka looks into the mirror yet again)
    Wow, but I have to admit I’m one good-looking guy.
    (The door bell rings)
    -Max, you better open this door right now!
    So, my name is Max.
    -*Max!
    (*Repeat twice)
    Coming!
    How did I get here?
    Actually, how did I get into this body?
    (Ka walks out of the bathroom and headed toward the front doors)
    -Max, what took you so long?
    Hmmm, I was in the bathroom.
    -It must be a miracle; you’re up early today.
    Why do I always wake up late?
    - Yep, but anyway, I have to tell you about my date last night.
    Oh, your date?
    Hmmm, are you thirst? Let give get grab you some water.
    - I’m not thirst…(her words faded away)
    Why is he always like that?
    (Ka is in the kitchen)
    This is really bad; I don’t even know her.
    (Ka takes a cup from the cabinet and looks around)
    I don’t even the person I’m possessing too.
    (Not be careful; Ka spills some water)
    -Max, are you done getting me water?
    I’m coming.
    (Ka slips on the water and fell back)
    (Everything went black)
    Where am I?
    ( Ka’s talking in her self-conscious)
    Here I go again.
    Why is everything all dark?
    Ouch, my head.
    -Max, do you hear me?
    Max, are you okay?
    -Who’s Max?
    Oh, yea, it’s me.
    (Ka opens her eyes)
    - Oh, thank, god, you’re okay.
    I was starting to worry.
    -Why I’m I here?
    -What are you talking?
    (Ka can’t move the body)
    Max, you were in the kitchen getting me some water.
    Remember?
    -No, I was in my room; sleeping.
    Did you do anything to me when I was sleeping?
    Did you drag me out of my room?
    -No, Max, you’re so gay.
    Why would I do that?
    You should know that; you’re twice my size.
    -Oh, I know, I was just kidding but why I’m I here?
    -Well, ask yourself.
    You came and opened the door for me.
    I don’t remember.
    -Maybe, you were too tired.
    Maybe, but I can’t walk out of bed and open the door.
    -Okay, whatever, but since you’re up now.
    Let’s talk about my date.
    - Oh, the one you went to, right?
    -Yep, he was so romantic, sweet, caring, and he was just a gentlemen.
    Oh, I see.
    (Max looks at the clock on the wall)
    Sorry, Sarah, but I have to go to work.
    -But it’s only 9 am.
    (Max rushed into his room and is getting ready)
    -I know but I’m only going to work until 1:30pm.
    -What time does your shift start today?
    -It starts at 9:30.
    -I will leave first, then.
    -Okay, bye.
    (Sarah left Max’s house)
    -I guess I will tell him next time.

    End of CH 2

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    CH 3-The other Me.

    Post  katythao on Fri Dec 18, 2009 5:21 am

    CH3
    -Hmmm, I’m back in the darkness.
    What should I do when I get back home?
    How do I get back home?
    So, many questions and no one to talk to you.
    Yet, again, I’m in this guy or Max’s body.
    Where was he going again?
    Oh, yea, work.
    I can’t move his body like this morning.
    The body is his and I’m just using it.
    It’s more like I possess him.
    Maybe, I should scream and see if someone hears me.
    (Ka screams)
    Help me, someone, I’m struck in this person’s body.
    -Max, are you okay?
    -Oh, my head just hurts.
    It feels like someone is screaming.
    (Tired of screaming, Ka stopped)
    -I guess nothing will work.
    -Max, why don’t go home and rest?
    -But Boss, I need to work.
    -I told you to call me Mary.
    -I’m sorry, Mary.
    -I treat my workers equally so I will let this slide this time.
    When you feel better; you will have to work overtime, okay?
    -Okay, it’s a deal.
    Thanks, boss, oh, I mean Mary.
    (Max rush to the back and change out of his work clothing)
    -Remember, overtime when you get better.
    -Yep, bye, everybody.
    (Everybody says good bye)
    So, I’m going to take a nap and then to go school.
    (Max arrived at his house)
    Let’s see, how long can I sleep?
    (Max looks at his watch)
    It’s only 12.
    I guess I can take a quick nap.
    (Max goes into the bathroom)
    But wait, I need to go early.
    I forgot to see how I looked today.
    (Max looks into the mirror)
    Good, as always.
    (Max is checking himself and looked at the mirror)
    This is too weird. I should not being doing this.
    (Looking at the mirror)(Clearing up his throat)
    Hi, hello, my name is Max. I’m in your biology class.
    -Oh, that’s so cheesy.
    -Who said that?
    -Me!
    -Ouch, my head.
    Who's there?
    -I say, Me.
    -Who’s me?
    -In front, look in the mirror.
    (Max look at the mirror)
    -Why are you in there?
    Well, I’m in your body.
    Right now, I’m you.
    -You’re me.
    No, that can’t be.
    I’m me and you’re you.
    -That’s what I thought but I have been with you since morning.
    -You been with me since this morning.
    -Yep, oh, I must be going crazy.
    *I’m going crazy.
    (*Repeat twice)
    -You’re not crazy.
    This is for real and I’m in your body.
    Another way would be I also possess your body.
    -That can’t be true.
    -Well, do you remember what happen this morning?
    -This morning.
    (The incident where he was in the kitchen)
    Oh, that incident.
    -Yes, well, don’t be mad but I used your body for a bit.
    -What did you do?
    -I just walked around and opened the door for that one girl.
    -You mean, Sarah.
    -Yes, I think so.
    I didn’t ask for her name.
    -Did you know anything else?
    (Ka remembers the little lifting up the short incident)
    -Nope, nothing else; I did nothing after that.
    -Oh, okay but this is so unreal.
    What am I going to do?
    You’re in my body and the worst part is I’m a man.
    -I know; I tried to find a way out of your body but I can’t.
    But we can talk and communicate through the mirror.
    It also seems like you can hear me when I screamed earlier.
    -That scream was from you.
    -Yep, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to do that.
    I was just trying to see if I could contact anyone.
    -That’s okay but next time tell me before hand that you're going to scream.
    -I well next time but can you do me a favor?
    -Nothing bad, right?
    -No, nothing bad.
    I just want a journal or something to write in.
    -Why do you need that?
    -I just like to write. Okay?
    What’s wrong with that?
    -Nothing, it’s just weird that some people still writes in journals.
    -Well, I’m one of those few.
    -Okay, I know.
    I need to know more about you.
    I don’t even know you’re name.
    -My name is Ka.
    -Ka, what a short name?
    Who name you?
    (Max saying while he giggles)
    -My father.
    (Max looks at the mirror and sees Ka’s expression)
    -Oh, your father.
    I’m sorry if I offended you in a way.
    -It’s okay; I don’t remember his face anymore.
    He left me and my mom when I was only 5.
    He wanted a wife who can give him more kids.
    Actually, he wanted more sons.
    That bastard.
    He left saying it was my mom’s fault.
    Didn’t he learn in sex ed class that the male’s sperm determine the sex.
    Also, it’s his fault. His sperm probably got lost.
    He left.
    (Ka’s tears starts to fall)
    -Are you okay?
    (Max touch the mirror)
    -I’m okay.
    (Ka can feel Max’s touch)
    -I believe you should go back to what you were doing?
    -oh, I’m done.
    I just need to gather my school stuff and get going.
    (He looked at his watch)
    Oh, it’s 1:40. I have to go to class.
    (Max runs out of the bathroom)
    -What time is your class?
    -It’s at 2:00.
    -You still have time.
    -Yea, right, it takes me 10 minutes to get there.
    Hang on; I’m going to run there.
    -Okay.
    (Max grabs his stuff; lock the doors; and ran out of his house)
    -Will I ever find a way out of his body?
    He don't seem to be a bad person.
    (Ka talking to herself)
    -What did you say?
    -Nothing.

    End of CH 3

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    CH 4-Max, Sarah, and Lucy.

    Post  katythao on Fri Dec 18, 2009 7:42 am

    CH 4

    Dear, Journal, I’m writing to you about my amazing adventure. I don’t know where to start and what’s going to happen? All I know, is I’m using Max’s body right now and I still don’t know how I got here. I was pretty shock when I ask Max what year I was in and a lot of interest things occurred. I’m in the year 2009. It’s so weird here. Everything, don’t seem right. Well, it don’t seem right to me. Of course, Max thinks I’m just hallucinating and I know I’m not. I was born on July 4, 2027. I was born in 2027 not 2009. Oh, the other day Max took me to his school. Well, it was my first time there. He wanted to show me this girl. I didn’t ask him who she was but I know she’s pretty. I only saw her from afar. I felt like I knew her but I can’t seem to figure it out. I’m happy that he brought this journal. So, I can finally write.

    Sincerely,
    Ka

    P.S.
    I have to write Max a note.

    Dear, Max, Sorry, if you’re hand hurts.
    I was writing a lot of stuff down.

    Sincerely,
    Ka

    (After Ka, fell asleep. Max wakes up)
    -Good morning, ouch, my hand.
    (Max sees the note and read it)
    Okay, I see. How much did she write to make my hand hurt?
    (Max shakes his hand)
    Oh, time to go to school.

    Dear Journal, Max has been very busy. He always working and going to school. He never has time. I talk to him here and there but he somehow always founded time to go see that girl. That girl’s name was Lucy but I’m not sure either. I believe he likes her but he’s always to scare to talk to her. I called him a loser a few times. Ever since then he has tried harder to get the courage to talk to her. I’m just writing a lot and have not come up with a plan to get out of his body.

    Sincerely,
    Ka

    (In the bathroom. In the morning, shaving)
    Max, I have a question. Do you know anyone who can see spirits?
    -Hmmm, I can see but I’m not sure.
    No one around me sees them but I can around.
    -Okay.
    -Why did you want to know?
    -Just because I’m curious.
    -You’re curious?
    -Yep, because I believe in those stuff.
    -Those stuff. What’s stuff?
    -You know, spirits…ghost…
    -I didn’t know you believe in that kind of stuff.
    -Oh, I’m I scaring you?
    -No, you’re not.
    I got you to protect me from those stuff.
    -What are you trying to say?
    (Ka is thinking hard)
    -Well, what I meant to say is someone…
    -Someone, what?
    -When I was younger, I went to a festival and there was a fortune teller.
    He told me that I’m a lost soul.
    He also says that I don’t need to worry because one day I will have something even better than a soul.
    So, I guess his prediction was true.
    You’re here now. So...
    (Ka is blushing)
    (Looking at the mirror)
    Are you blushing?
    -No, I’m not. My cheeks are always red.
    Especially, around this time. Fall is almost coming to an end.
    Winter is just around the corner.
    (The door bell rings)
    -Max, it’s Sarah.
    Open the door.
    (Max cleans his razor and goes to open the door)
    Max, I went on another date again.
    -Oh, with the same guy.
    -Yep.
    -So, what have you decided?
    -I’m thinking about marrying him.
    -Oh, are you?
    That’s good to hear.
    (Sarah stands up)
    -Max, why don’t you understand me?
    I want you to care. Why don’t you care?
    -What are you talking about, Sarah?
    -Max, I’m in ….
    Forget it; just forget that this ever happened.
    I’m sorry I was being rude.
    I’m leaving so you have a nice day.
    (Sarah walks out of Max’s house)
    -You know Sarah likes you, right?
    -I know but I believe it’s just that she has not seen the real me.
    -The real you?
    I believe Sarah will find the right guy and its not me.
    -Me and Sarah grew up with each other.
    I don’t have those special feelings toward her.
    -But you have special feelings for Lucy, right?
    -I do. I like Lucy since we were kids.
    Sarah doesn’t like Lucy.
    It has been like that for a long time.
    Both, Sarah and Lucy are from rich families.
    I was born and raised in a working family.
    My family worked for Sarah’s family and that's where I met Lucy.
    Lucy was a very lucky girl. She had everything but I knew she was missing something.
    -That something was love, right?
    -Yep, she never got love from her parents.
    Their love was different from what she had in mind.
    -I see. Is that why you like her?
    -No, the reason I like her is because she don’t rank people.
    She’s very open to everybody and spoke to me like she would to a friend.
    Her smile was warm.
    -What do you like about me?
    -You?
    I’m not sure. I know you’re good at writing.
    -How did you know that?
    -I was reading your…
    -You did what?
    -I…hmmm…
    -You read my journal without my permission.
    How could you?
    -Now, I’m going to give you a headache.
    (Ka starts to scream)
    -Ouch, stop that.
    -Lalalalalala….
    What, I didn’t hear you?

    Dear Journal, It’s starting to snow and I have been here since September. Max has been doing very well in school. He’s one of the top students in this class. I have been teaching him some words that are used in the present time. Sometime, I have to constantly tell myself that its 2009 not 2045. I really want to get out of his body to help around the house instead of just using his body. I want to show him who I'm really am.

    Sincerely,
    Ka

    End of CH 4

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    CH 5 -Lucy is my grandma?

    Post  katythao on Wed Mar 17, 2010 6:01 am

    CH 5

    Dear Journal, The days are coming and going and it feels like I'm not going back anytime soon. I wonder is being in his body suppose to be a lesson I need to learn or what's do I need to gain from this? I'm lost and trying to find answers.

    Ka

    (Ka looks at the alarm clock)
    Okay, one minute before his clocks ring.
    (The alarm clock rings)
    (Max gets up and hit it)
    -oh, tonight is that party.
    -What party?
    -A friend. I promise him that I will help me get the party set up.
    -Are you going to attend the party?
    -I'm not sure.
    If he ask me to stay then I'll stay.
    (Max gets up and is about to enter the bathroom)
    Okay, you know the rule.
    Close your eyes.
    -How long?
    -You know.
    Right, I know.
    (Ka giggles)
    (Later in the day)
    (In the kitchen)
    -Hey, Stefan, where do I start?
    -Hey, Max, you're here early.
    Yep, I'm going to help a friend in need.
    -Dude, you're so funny.
    Well, you can start by blowing these balloons.
    (Stefan handles the balloons to Max)
    I'm going to go buy the beer.
    One of my other friend is coming to help as well.
    See in a bit. If you're hungry help yourself.
    (Stefan leaves)
    -So, I guess you're the balloon boy for now.
    -Ka, you're funny.
    (Max stare at Ka's reflection through the glass doors)
    If only I can...
    (The front door opens)
    -Hello, anybody home?
    (Max enters the living room)
    Hi, I'm Lucy and you are?
    (Lucy takes her hand out)
    It's Max! My name is Max.
    (Max shakes her hand)
    You must be the friend that Stefan say was going to come.
    -Yep, he asked me to help him out.
    So, what are we going to do first?
    -Well, I started to blow up the balloons.
    (Lucy looks and see only one balloon done)
    -Oh, I think its going to take us awhile.
    (Lucy laughs while Max blush)
    okay, let's start.
    (2 hours later)
    okay, this should do the trick and we're done.
    Good job, Max.
    -Thanks, you too.
    (Stefan walks in)
    Hey, guys since you're done with the decorations. Let's get this party started.
    -Can you excuse us, Lucy?
    (Max drags Stefan up stair to his room)
    -Stefan, where were you?
    I was with Lucy for 2 whole hours.
    -Dude, I'm so sorry. I was at Kelly's house.
    -Your ex?
    Are you serious?
    -we were making up.
    Stefan, you have never been serious with anyone.
    I know you.
    -It's okay, Max. I know you like Lucy.
    That's why I invited her to come help with the set up.
    I was just trying to hook you guys up with each other.
    -I don't need your help.
    I can get Lucy.
    -Fine, then I will not help you anymore.
    If you don't make a move tonight then I will.
    Anyway, it sounds like the DJ is here.
    Let's go.
    (Max turns on the water and wash his face)
    -Max, are you going to stay for the party?
    Ka, I'm doing to do it tonight.
    You're going to do what tonight?
    (Stefan yells at Max to come down stair)
    -Coming.
    (Stefan grabs the DJ's mic)
    -Hey, everybody this is my best friend, Max.
    Enjoy the party and if there's anything you need then holler.
    Max, dude, you need to make your move.
    Please drink this to help you.
    (Stefan hands Max a cup of beer)
    -Max, don't drink it.
    -Ka, I will be fine.
    (Max drinks it down quickly)
    (Max walks toward Lucy but before he can reach her he faints)
    -Max, are you okay?
    Max, can you hear me?
    I'm taking over.
    (Ka takes over his body)
    (Stefan runs over to see Max)
    -Max, are you okay?
    -I'm good. Don't worry about me.
    -Since, you're doing so good with just one cup of beer.
    How about another one?
    -Its okay.
    I don't need it.
    (Ka thinks about what Max was talking about earlier and gets upset)
    You know what maybe a cup will not do.
    (Ka walks to the table of beers and wines and grab a few bottles)
    This is better!
    (Ka starts to drink)
    -Hell yeah, that's how we do it.
    (Stefan yells)
    Yeah, I thought you say you can't drink too much.
    It's bad for you, right?
    (Ka starts to feel sick and rush to the bathroom)
    (The bathroom was being used so Ka runs up stair)
    (Ka is throwing up in the bathroom in Stefan's room)
    (Stefan walks in)
    Max, I told you. Man, just take it at a time.
    (Everything around Stefan went slow motion and for a few second he sees Ka)
    Max, are you okay?
    -I'm okay but I feel sick.
    (Stefan rubs his eyes)
    Hey, Max, you can use my room to rest so I'm going back to the party.
    -Wait, I need some...
    Ouch, my head hurts.
    It's your false, Max.
    (Ka lays in Stefan's bed)
    (Stefan is feeling weir)
    Did I see Max as a girl?
    What the hell?
    I can't be gay.
    I'm a guy and I like girls.
    (Stefan goes to his other bedroom)
    -Max, is that you?
    (Stefan goes to the bed)
    -Lucy.
    -oh, yeah, it's Lucy.
    -Are you drunk, Lucy?
    -Yep, maybe I drink too much.
    I kinda like you, Max.
    You're nice.
    (Lucy grabs Stefan)
    But I like bad boys.
    -I'm not...
    (Lucy starts to kiss Stefan)
    (In the other room)
    -So, Lucy is important to Max.
    What was her last name?
    (Ka gets up and look around in the room)
    Where's the light?
    (Ka finds the light and turn it on)
    So, if Max is Stefan's best friend. They must have known each other for a long time)
    (Ka looks at Stefan's bookshelf)
    So, there should be a photo album here somewhere.
    Ouch, my head. I'm not going to drink again.
    (Ka picks a book and look at it)
    This is not a photo album but a yearbook.
    Where is Max?
    I will look at the index first.
    I found Max.
    Mrs. Cook's class.
    Oh, I found Max.
    (Ka see a girl with the name Lucy)
    Lucy's last name is Bonita.
    Wait, it can't be.
    What's her middle name?
    (The yearbook read Marie)
    No.

    End of CH 5

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